10 Tips to Write a Novel
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Follow Your Inspiration
You will certainly have noticed that so far, I have insisted on the need to be organized and to plan things: preparing folders, the chronology, thinking in advance about potential inconsistencies… So now let’s talk about spontaneity.
If you’re writing the story you want to tell, it’s very likely that new ideas will come up during the writing process, while you’re truly immersed in the world you’re creating. You then become at the same time reader and author; you’re discovering what you are writing (it’s a little complicated to explain; better let you experience it).
During these moments where inspiration flows in, and which often are transition parts with nothing in particular happening (otherwise the scene is probably very clear in your mind and there is no space for unexpected elements), it can happen that we suddenly write down something spontaneous: a new character pops up, a scene develops in an unexpected way…
You think it’s strange? After all, as the author, aren’t we supposed to master our tale? Of course, and yet…
What matters though is whether to keep these new elements or stick to the plan. And in general I would advise keeping them, especially because I believe that when we write a story we truly care about, inspiration (no matter its source) can only enrich the tale. And so it’s not uncommon to discover that this unexpected event gives depth to the story in the end, or that this character you created out of the blue can be used again later on, etc.
That being said, following this piece of advice certainly doesn’t mean not following the previous ones! Especially paying attention to consistency; very seldom will a new element have no impact on the rest of the story. And sometimes you just need to accept that the idea was plainly bad and only makes things more complicated for no real reason, and thus discard it (even if you understand this at the very end of the adventure, once the book is fully written).
If we look at the “Chronicles of Galadria”, the example that comes to mind is the characters Tyv & Paeh, which we meet early in volume 2. I had absolutely never planned them in my story. In a sense they came up of their own accord! But thanks to them I was able in volume 6 to drastically strengthen an atmosphere I had planned early on to create, and it would have been a much more difficult task without them.
So dive into your story when you write, let it guide you when necessary, and in general keep everything that comes out of that relationship. Then apply the previous tips to keep the tale consistent, and be honest with yourself to remove what, all in all, doesn’t belong to the story.
2 Comments
Lillian Moore
I thought it was interesting that you say writing a novel is an adventure not and ordeal. I can see how writing can be a fun process. Writing down your own thoughts and displaying them on paper can make you feel somewhat naked and exposed to the reader. This for me has made my writing more of an ordeal than an adventure. The stress of feeling like my story needs to make complete sense right from the beginning makes the writing process so much slower. As I read through your article, I liked your first tip the best. Write the story you want to tell rather than the story the readers want. I feel obligated to my readers sometimes and that gets me in a tough spot. I really appreciate your tips. I am already improving my writing. Thank you.
David Gay-Perret
And thank you for having taken the time to read all this and leave a comment!
I actually haven’t experience the “feeling naked” you mention since I didn’t think of publishing until two and a half year after having completed the story! Which means I mostly wrote it for myself, so no stress there.
As for having a story that makes sense right from the start: it’s only my opinion, and my story actually didn’t follow this tip when I started (I built up and tried to find explanations as I went), but with hindsight I believe it actually saves a lot of time and headaches. And so I think you get back the time invested in planning and thinking forward a bit when, at the end, everything falls nicely into place.
In any case I wish you the best of luck in your writing endeavor!