10 Tips to Write a Novel
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Use Visual Helps
This advice is directly linked with the previous one and is also about helping you keep your story consistent.
A book, despite all the imagination, energy and emotions it contains, remains a string of words. The good thing is, as you’ll hear from people who were disappointed by the movie version of the books they love, that a text means you can visualize your own version of the story, while any kind of visual work will necessarily force a certain picture onto the viewer.
True enough, but to have pictures of what we’re writing will also make the specific items more real, along with the story as a whole and the universe (which helps keep the motivation up), and simplify the writing process.
So it’s not about publishing your visual creations, but simply having them with you so you can use them and make things easier for yourself. Indeed, having a drawing (as ugly as it may be) or a picture will simplify descriptions (objects, characters, landscapes…). Drawing the schematics of a building with a view from above will help you remain consistent when telling of the events taking place there (for example you won’t write that somebody came in from the window and, two chapters later, insist that this room has no window). If you make a map of the fictional world, you can put various places on it and calculate distances and thus travel duration depending on transportation means. Drawing a chronology of the novel’s universe will allow for accurate and consistent historical references throughout the tale, and so on.
Maybe some people don’t need this, but I know each scene came to me as an image filmed by a camera that I have then described. As such, drawing it on paper helped me a lot (even though I’m incredibly bad at drawing!). And when it comes to the world map, it was vital in order to know how long it took from one city to another and to be able to follow the flow of time. I was even lucky enough to have a carpenter make a wooden version of the two main characters’ swords, so that I could see how big they were and how to handle them.
So don’t hesitate to draw and/or create “for real” some elements of your story to give it more depth and to simplify the work aiming at keeping it logical (descriptions, distance calculations, chronologies, proper handling of certain items…).
2 Comments
Lillian Moore
I thought it was interesting that you say writing a novel is an adventure not and ordeal. I can see how writing can be a fun process. Writing down your own thoughts and displaying them on paper can make you feel somewhat naked and exposed to the reader. This for me has made my writing more of an ordeal than an adventure. The stress of feeling like my story needs to make complete sense right from the beginning makes the writing process so much slower. As I read through your article, I liked your first tip the best. Write the story you want to tell rather than the story the readers want. I feel obligated to my readers sometimes and that gets me in a tough spot. I really appreciate your tips. I am already improving my writing. Thank you.
David Gay-Perret
And thank you for having taken the time to read all this and leave a comment!
I actually haven’t experience the “feeling naked” you mention since I didn’t think of publishing until two and a half year after having completed the story! Which means I mostly wrote it for myself, so no stress there.
As for having a story that makes sense right from the start: it’s only my opinion, and my story actually didn’t follow this tip when I started (I built up and tried to find explanations as I went), but with hindsight I believe it actually saves a lot of time and headaches. And so I think you get back the time invested in planning and thinking forward a bit when, at the end, everything falls nicely into place.
In any case I wish you the best of luck in your writing endeavor!